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My first photoshop creation

Discussion in 'Photoshop' started by se_p800, Nov 25, 2007.

  1. #1
    What do you think of my sig that i made using photoshop? Its my first proper thing ive made on photoshop :)

    [​IMG]
     
    se_p800, Nov 25, 2007 IP
  2. Satz

    Satz Active Member

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    i seriously think you need a better text , otherthan that..it looks gr8 !

    congrats
     
    Satz, Nov 25, 2007 IP
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    scriptmachine Banned

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    #3
    But your first design well try
     
    scriptmachine, Nov 25, 2007 IP
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    #4
    Looks good but text and you can also delete the other cell below it.
     
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    #5
    everything from the center, all the way to the left looks good. but the right side including the text and the object below it just looks non-professional. im not a big fan of the background gradient either - but I guess its good for what you were going for, and as a first sig I give it a 4/10. all in all it just doesn't have much depth as a whole image.

    edit - just play around with some layer techniques, and maybe try some different layer types. Maybe add a border as well.
     
    Relient, Nov 25, 2007 IP
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    #6
    looks nice ^^

    why dont you add luigi also? or the princess ^^
     
    dbckun, Nov 25, 2007 IP
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    #7
    Well, nice design for the first try. I would recommend making the text stand out more, as it is right now, you need to concentrate hard to see it.

    Also make the circles blend in with the background, as it is right now, it looks like the image was done by different person and the circles were just pasted in.

    Hope this helps.
     
    yuriym21, Nov 25, 2007 IP
  8. se_p800

    se_p800 Well-Known Member

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    2nd creation:

    [​IMG]

    What do you guys think?
     
    se_p800, Nov 28, 2007 IP
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    114211 Well-Known Member

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    yeah i agree the text needs work but other than that i like it!
     
    114211, Nov 28, 2007 IP
  10. waxingpoetic

    waxingpoetic Well-Known Member

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    #10
    First of all, that is an EXCELLENT first try.

    I agree with whomever above said from center to the left is great. The right side needs some work. The image of the PSP is low quality. Also, it's easy to add depth to creations if Photoshop using layer styles like drop shadow and bevel and emboss. Best of luck...and again, GREAT JOB!
     
    waxingpoetic, Nov 28, 2007 IP
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    #11
    if u ask me (bad graphic designer) it s looking great :D
     
    iliqueur, Nov 28, 2007 IP
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    or toadstool?? :) looks nice but text is hard to read
     
    d tea, Nov 28, 2007 IP
  13. se_p800

    se_p800 Well-Known Member

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    #13
    thanks guys, but what about my 2nd creation (the blue one) 5 posts up?
     
    se_p800, Nov 29, 2007 IP
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    #14
    looks great..but how about a change in text..
     
    leasingkaye, Nov 29, 2007 IP
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    #15
    I liked your first design, very japanese styled, but i'm no graphic designer..:p
    About the second one, i'd love to comment it but i can't see it.
     
    pastel, Nov 29, 2007 IP
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    waxingpoetic Well-Known Member

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    I can't see the second one, but I would love to.
     
    waxingpoetic, Nov 29, 2007 IP
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    #17
    i don't think that's your first creation to be honest .

    When i made my first thing in photoshop i didn't know how to make a border like that, or how to add "renders" .

    The only way you can do it, it's reading some tutorials before and then making it, but still in that way, i don't think so .
     
    BLT, Nov 29, 2007 IP
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    I love it! I can't see the second one, but the first one is awesome.
     
    Mackadoo, Nov 29, 2007 IP
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    reezluv Active Member

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    #19
    that's great for the first time with PS..me too..Now I spend almost 4 hours a day for Photoshop...:p
     
    reezluv, Nov 30, 2007 IP
  20. se_p800

    se_p800 Well-Known Member

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    #20

    Obviously I would have messed around first experimenting with stuff...but i have never saved anything or uploaded anything before this so i would consider it my first creation.

    Oh and I dont know weather it means anything but this is the pic i started off with:
    [​IMG]

    And i dno why you guys cant see the 2nd one lol, I can. ts not that great anyway..
     
    se_p800, Nov 30, 2007 IP