Can you please tell me if this is right?

Hi to all DP members

Being a newbie and all, I tried to start my very first blog.

Can anyone please let me know if the template I'm using is right.

I've a feeling that something is not right. May be the colors?

the blog is at : hxxp://makelivingonline.blogspot.com

replace 'xx' with 'tt'

 

It wouldn't be my choice, but it's ok.

What I'd be more concerned about is spelling, grammar and punctuation. If this is an area of difficulty, it might help if you type it up in Microsoft Word or something, so that it can check it for you before posting it up.

 

Thanx tomah.

 

I noticed that you changed the theme again. Maybe you should go for something more crisp and clean that represents what you're writing about. Maybe someone who knows more about this could correct me, but I reckon you should go for clean lines in white, blue's and/or greens. If not these colours, at least make them bold. Pastel shades don't really suit a site about making money in my opinion.

But then...what do I know?!

 

Thanks a lot.