Completley revamped--Please Review

Hi guys,
with suggestions from some memebers i have completley changed my blogs.Here they are

http://rich-ads.blogspot.com
http://freeglobe.blogspot.com

 

Your rich ads site I've mentioned before - made for AdSense and tacky, but isn't blended too badly. I disagree with the subject area because it is sooooo obvious you are trying to milk AdSense for all its worth. Freeglobe ditto.

Your pages look terrible (understatement) - badly clashing colours, terrible spelling, grammar and layout.

Well, you did ask.

 

I have to agree with CountryBoy, your sites could do with a lot of improving.

I don't like the font type, and the template isn't that great. The ads are blended pretty nice, though.

 

thanks guys,
i didn't spell check my words before i posted.also what background colour d you think would be better.
Plase advice on this also

 

Oh wow, that just hurts my eyes. No bold type in white. Agreeing with CB with your objective. Write some decent content or pay someone to write it for you. Get rid of the bold white type. Headlines are okay in bold, but not the entire site.

 

Yeah, you can do allot better if you put more then 2-3 minutes into your idea. Just write some content about the high paying keyword subject. It's not really that hard to do and make it look good. I just think you should put some more effort into it.