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Discussion in 'General Business' started by J.A. van de Brug, Sep 8, 2006.

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    If I listen to my friends en family then they are often in the need to get some software to help them with starting their own business. E.g. some accounting software and project software. Also people who are doing volunteering work for a club need supporting software on their PC.
    So I created a website to help them getting started. I just finished my first version of it:

    http://www.wikke41guides.com

    Please let me know what you think and how I can improve the site.
     
    J.A. van de Brug, Sep 8, 2006 IP
  2. jhmattern

    jhmattern Illustrious Member

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    I'd say hire an editor or carefully proofread your site. You've only got one page with actual content that I see (of your own), and there are several spelling and grammatical errors - not going to look good to anyone wanting business advice, tips, or suggestions from you. Even in the first sentence you spelled "helpful" wrong.

    Also, try adding some actual content. Review the software titles rather than just linking to them. You're also just using descriptions copied from the manufacturers' sites. That's more than likely a copyright violation. Write your own.

    And don't abbreviate software as SW in your menu. "Software" is more important than "free" if you're trying to push this is a software-related site. If you insist on having "free" in every menu item, then widen your menu.

    Jenn
     
    jhmattern, Sep 8, 2006 IP
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    Abundant1 Peon

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    Looks like you got your proofreading done, the text flows very well.

    There is no contact information on any of the pages, however.
    very pleasant colors.
    Just my $.02
     
    Abundant1, Oct 21, 2006 IP