Critique My Site Layout And Adsense Placement

What changes would you make to my pages as far as the way they look and or the adsense placement. What would it cost me to have someone clean up my site for me and make everything more uniform ? Do I need to do that ?
Please be as specific as possible. Thanks.
Here are links.

Xbox
Playstation 3
Weight Loss
Marketing

 

I'm no expert (and I'd be happy to have your sites), but yar they seem kinda "messy". Maybe that's good in a way.

Oh ya, your Weight Loss blog gives me "You are not authorized to view this page".

 

Hi Poetrymom,

There's alot of site you got there. In my personal opinion, I do not like site layout who display adsense link ads before their post as I feel that it sort of emphasize that the adsense links is much more important than the actual contents you are providing, which shouldn't be that way.

If I were to choose between the 4 sites, I prefer the Playstation 3 blogsite as our dudes at MenDNA loves blue!

Good luck on your site.

Cheers,
Webmaster of MenDNA.com

 

I have checked just one of your sites and am not an expert but I think your ads on that site are placed just the way I would do that.

 

Blogspot are now currently have problems.
most of the blogs cannot be accessed.

 

1st impression = MFA

2nd impression = MFA

Although you tried to blend your adsense in, but it stood out pretty well. A better template will make it look not so obvious. Why dont you try to put the Adsense in the <Itempage>. A least the 1st impression wont be so bad.

Anyway, it is one of those site, that i will [X] it most of the time without reading thru it, even if the "headers" / topics are of my interest.

Hope this critique helps

 

Sorry, What is MFA ? Thanks so much for your time.

 

Could you give me a little more info as far as what that tag does, and how exactly you mean that I should use it? Thanks so very much for your time.

 

Made For Adsense.

 

hype everubody..

 

I think you first must change the design of blogs