Hi.. Can kindly review my site and tell me how to get more traffic and revinue

Hi,

Can some one review this site, http://www.4timepass.com?, I created it as a hobby, and not a serious web designer. So I always wanted some one to review my site and help getting more traffic and for some one who can give me tips to increase my revenue..

I earned a 23$ for almst 6 months.. Cos i dont work on my site frequently.. and dont give it any publicity. Can some one gimme some quick tips so that i can earn some revenue from it??

 

Well honestly your site is really bad.

First. Remove this table use divs
Your site is messy, order it
If you are using adsense (you are) Don't use Fivehists and other traffic generators.. it's against google adsense TOS


well mate there are so many mistakes on your site that i cant review them all

i don't want to offend you.

I sugest you reading sites like mine http://indart.org to get to know how to make a website and earn money with it..
I'm making this site as i'm learning this too so all the articles are realy working

There are lots of sites like mine. The best one is DP forum where you`re at.
Read the posts here.. and try try try try... nothing is more eficient than that

but first - before you think of bringing traffic and making money... - get you a nice looking site with good content

 

Thanks for the review.... and its no offence.. and i need comments on it and also suggestions.
I am not a wed designer by profession, it is just a hobby to collect pictures and put them on my site. So i dont have any one around me to review and give me suggestions...

Thankyou, your suggestion is very helpful and i expect more form you.

 

maybe if you want to just colect pictures and upload them to your site i sujest you PHOTOBLOGING... very nice CMS for this is pixelpost find it at http://pixelpost.org i'm using this and i'm very happy with that.