My first Wallpaper

It took me 5 hours to finish, I think It should be fixed a little but I don't really sure. Do you like it? Feedback appreciated.

 

I don't like it very much, and frankly it confuses me. Flying bunnies, two random cream colored clouds in a sea of blue and purple clouds, a balloon, and a rainbow with two white bands??? Maybe If I was trippin' acid... And a castle from 20km would look smaller than that.

 

I understanded what you think. It is an screen that something you would saw in a dream ( or in my dream ), a little confuse and fragmentary. However, thanks much for your feedback it is really helpful with me

 

I dont really like it as I wouldnt use it as my Wallpaper I looked at it and it made me laugh a little with the confusion and all but what made you come up with the idea of designing this?

Thanks,
John

 

It came out my mind as soon as I was going to make a wallpaper. But I'm not very skillful with photoshop so I cound't do all things I want. I had only done the thing I able to do with help from some tutorials.
Oh and the name came from the news about Susan Boyle and the Britains Got Talent I read

 

Well hey its just a start I was new to photoshop once to it takes time but anyone who puts there mind to it can become successful in anything so just keep practicing look up some tutorials and just practice thats all i can say.

Thanks,
John

 

sounds like martin luther king to me love the rabbit.

 

Changing the colors for clouds,sky etc would help you to get positive feedbacks i guess.But its your first attempt,i would say use your talent and make it more attractive. i liked the concept anyways.

 

Thanks every one. I try making another version. I call it Day-time version. Hope someone like it

 

Definitely better, but you may want to try using a less intense shade of blue, and also white text on a cyan background can be difficult to read. Anyway, to improve your photoshop skills, why don't you try doing smaller projects like sigs, avatars, or posters, rather than wallpapers. If you are looking for PS tutorials, try psd.tutsplus.com/ Good Luck!

 

Really looks great

 

The 2nd Wallpaper is looking great.. Just decrease the White Outglow for the Text rest verything is good

 

Definitely better than 1st one, but direction for heaven and hell was making the concept clear,why you removed it?i would say play with rainbaow a bit more and make it little fadded and shadded and with text too for your wallpaper to look more happening best of luck.

 

I looked at your second rendition and my eyes almost died. No offense but that is a very intense cyan. I have my laptop on full brightness, and it's extremely powerful. It does not look "terrible", I commend you on your effort. Good luck, and remember rome was not built in a day. Take your time, learn and you will become better in time.

 

Both are very nice especially I like your title
I DREAMED... A DREAM....

 

Thanks everyone. I know making wallpaper is out of my ability but I just want to try making one. I would continue to learn Photoshop. Hope I can make something nice in the future. Thanks for all

 

It's nice for a first try, but the writing on the top right seems.... a little out of place? Maybe it's just me, personally I don't like the font. Other than that, well done!

 

man 2nd one is better, I think you are a beginner, I would say for a beginner its a job well done.

 

Ha...Whenever I hear the "I dreamed a dream..." - I think of Morpheus from the Matrix.

 

I like your concept of "Heaven 20KM", it means you are very close to heaven as compare to Hell, and this is what most people like to see in their dreams

Since you said you are not good in photoshop so I would not blame you for "Low-Quality" graphic. Keep practicing and you will be perfect.