Need Help Im Doing A Site For David Carradine

Guys,

David Carradine has asked me to do a site for his new book coming out October 1st. The site is up at http://www.thekillbilldiary.com

This week ill be shooting a video ad of him on the homepage kind of a welcome message to his fans.

I was wondering if you guys could give me some advice on how to make the page better and possibly edit the html for me so i can optomize it to show more google ads.

Any help or advice would be greatly appreciated.
I have attached the html page for you to edit if you choose to help me. Also is it safe to say i should achieve good ranking for the words "kill bill diary" or "The Kill Bill Diary" because those words are in the domain? Once its spidered that is.

 

Quick suggestions...don't use the same color text for the heading of the paragraph and the paragraph itself...makes it look tacky and cheap.

Personal message lines are all the way on the left...need to be centered.

Does David know your putting AdSense on the page to promote his book?

 

yes david has no problems with the adsense. im also getting a percentage of the sales i already work with him on my other site http://www.hanzoswords.com as well as travel with him to various autograph shows, ill be going with him to the U.K. over thanksgiving to a big autograph/celebrity show.

Ill also be doing his official myspace page as soon as we shoot the video for it and the killbilldiary.com site.

Thanks for your input.
-kevin

 

what do you mean by personal message lines? what browser are you using?

 

Firefox 2.0RC3

Name of Person and Personal Message You wish David to write are all the on the left and are obscured by the black line.

 

they are showing up perfect in internet explorer. not sure why its buggy in firefox.

 

so do you think my site will be easily indexed and highly ranked for its keywords because of the domain name? "kill bill diary" "the kill bill diary"? I also own the .net and .org how should i put those to use?

 

How did you end up doing websites for David Carradine?

 

Ive been working with him for a few years, i sell swords for a living see my site http://www.hanzoswords.com he did a commercial for my home page.

I just moved to California so i can do more work with celebrities, i also work with Michael Madsen (Kill Bill, Reservoir Dogs, as well as Cynthia Rothrock (martial arts actrees) and several of the kids from the Harry Potter Movies.

You have any input on my thekillbilldiary site? I would love is someone could edit the html page i attached to show more adsense ads in good locations, im new to the whole adsense thing.

 

If someone wants to help me i will be glad to send them an autographed copy of the book.

 

name drop much?

 

maybe a little

 

As far as the adsense ads, I'd change the background to yellow with red links and blend it into the rest of your site. I'd change the bottom ad to 2 large squares, it will look like links to related articles. Put the ads on top of each other and to the left side of the page. I'd also make it firefox compatible. Firefox is becoming the browser of choice.