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Need help with my English

Discussion in 'General Chat' started by hostm, Jan 8, 2012.

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    Hi, I'm going to buy a few articles for my blog about medicine but I want to make titles myself. My English is not native, but I need help to make great titles. What would you say about the title "medicine that helps" for example? Is it great? Further I'll give a couple of other titles if you decide to help.
     
    hostm, Jan 8, 2012 IP
  2. joshkinchela

    joshkinchela Member

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    Ok well i would make the title "The Medicine That Helps" with out """ instead of "medicine that helps" :) it just looks the part and sounds great.
     
    joshkinchela, Jan 8, 2012 IP
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    Well, all medicine helps us according to its nature. In this sense drugs are also medicine which is not good for health. I think your blogs title should be Effects of Medicine to maintain sound health.
     
    rising_sun, Jan 8, 2012 IP
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    hostm Well-Known Member

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    Thank you, guys. In my title I don't mean a drug (tablet) but medicine in full - doctors, hospitals, pharmacies etc.
     
    hostm, Jan 9, 2012 IP
  5. joshkinchela

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    well maby you should put it as "the medical treatment that helps"
     
    joshkinchela, Jan 9, 2012 IP
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    Spoiltdiva Acclaimed Member

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    When trying to gain attention in order to advertise yourself,"shorter is sweeter".........Stick to your original title.
     
    Spoiltdiva, Jan 9, 2012 IP
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    hostm Well-Known Member

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    Spoiltdiva, thank you for your wise advice :)
     
    hostm, Jan 9, 2012 IP
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    If you are going to subscribe to the idea of shorter is best, why not something like "Helpful Medicine" or "Medicinal Help". I personally like as specific whenever possible such as "Cancer Medicine Help" (if the article was about cancer medicine).
     
    goupilandcie, Jan 9, 2012 IP
  9. joshkinchela

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    i do agree with faik123
     
    joshkinchela, Jan 10, 2012 IP