Newbie Here...Can you review my website and give suggestions/comments?

Hi,

Yes, I am an ultra-newbie and was wondering if anyone here could take a look at my site and give me some helpful hint/comments

http://www.rentnapili.com/

I am getting a good ctr so far but it is so new I am not getting very many visitors.

Thank you!

 

Well nice content, but the sites look very empty in my oppinion. The ad title colors don`t fit with your titles.

 

Thank you, Michelangelo. I will try and work on my ad titles. When you say "empty" can you be more specific?

 

Looking briefly at your pages I note that many parts of your content are cut and pasted from your competition. Other parts are very loosely paraphrased. You might just pass the original content algorithms with the search engines, but your SERP and search engine traffic will be poor compared to truely original content. Should you start outranking some of the content you scraped then your competitor will try, probably successfully to have you flagged as a copyright abuser with the search engines. Ask yourself if you have realy contributed something to the web or if you have just rebranded the same facts already available.

I also note you may be breaking the TOS with images butted up flush against the add units. You could use a bit of space around the images flush against your text also.

A plain documenty looking webpage can be effective with the plain looking google adds, but try and use a different colour for your headings and links and match these to your adds.

 

with empty I mean, that whole site is nearly white, the fonts aren`t that dark, but very narrow, that results a concentration of the dark color in the middle. There is a wide section around the text which is very bright.

 

Hi

try to blend in the ads more into your website so that you can earn more...coming to the visitors, you need to employ the standard techniques as per the seo standards and see what happens...donot do hard work but smart work!
Just keep this in mind...implement new innovative ideas...and you will be the ruler...

cheers