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Poems

Discussion in 'General Chat' started by nuhassan, Jan 20, 2006.

  1. #1
    Hi guys;
    This thread is dedicated to poetry.
    I came up with a poem wanted to share with u.

    F A M I L Y

    I ran into a stranger as he passed by,
    "Oh excuse me please" was my reply.

    He said, "Please excuse me too;
    I wasn't watching for you."

    We were very polite, this stranger and I.
    We went on our way and we said goodbye.

    But at home a different story is told,
    How we treat our loved ones, young and old.

    Later that day, cooking the evening meal,
    My son stood beside me very still.

    When I turned, I nearly knocked him down.
    "Move out of the way," I said with a frown.

    He walked away, his little heart broken.
    I didn't realize how harshly I'd spoken.

    While I lay awake in bed,
    God's still small voice came to me and said,

    "While dealing with a stranger,
    common courtesy you use,
    but the family you love, you seem to abuse.

    Go and look on the kitchen floor,
    You'll find some flowers there by the door.

    Those are the flowers he brought for you.
    He picked them himself: pink, yellow and blue.

    He stood very quietly not to spoil the surprise,
    you never saw the tears that filled his little eyes."

    By this time, I felt very small,
    And now my tears began to fall.

    I quietly went and knelt by his bed;
    "Wake up, little one, wake up," I said.

    "Are these the flowers you picked for me?"
    He smiled, "I found 'em, out by the tree.

    I picked 'em because they're pretty like you.
    I knew you'd like 'em, especially the blue."

    I said, "Son, I'm very sorry for the way I acted today;
    I shouldn't have yelled at you that way."
    He said, "Oh, Mom, that's okay.
    I love you anyway."

    I said, "Son, I love you too,
    and I do like the flowers, especially the blue."

    FAMILY
    Are you aware that if we died tomorrow, the company
    that we are working for could easily replace us in
    a matter of days.
    But the family we left behind will feel the loss
    for the rest of their lives.



    And come to think of it, we pour ourselves more
    into work than into our own family,
    an unwise investment indeed,
    don't you think?
    So what is behind the story?



    Do you know what the word FAMILY means?
    FAMILY = (F)ATHER (A)ND (M)OTHER (I) (L)OVE (Y)OU
     
    nuhassan, Jan 20, 2006 IP
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  2. mazhi

    mazhi Peon

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    #2
    :) Cute :) Congrats for doing it :)
     
    mazhi, Jan 20, 2006 IP
  3. girbaud

    girbaud Peon

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    #3
    nice info there:
    Father
    Aand
    Mother
    I
    Love
    You

    what about the siblings?
     
    girbaud, Jan 20, 2006 IP
  4. Rainbow

    Rainbow Peon

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    #4
    It was awesome, i love it! Thanks for sharing!:)
     
    Rainbow, Jan 20, 2006 IP
  5. just-4-teens

    just-4-teens Peon

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    #5
    heres one i wrote

    A Smile

    A smile brings joy,
    A smile brings hope,
    A smile brings happiness,
    To those that cannot cope.

    A smile is a wonderful thing,
    That is easy to teach,
    It can be used in load of places,
    Like at home, in school or laying on the beach.

    A smile has all sorts of powers,
    Some are really neat,
    Like what you do for me,
    When you bring the heavens to my feet.

    I love it when you smile,
    It makes my day complete,
    For when you smile,
    It makes my heart beat.

    For me a smile is all i need,
    To tell me everything is alright,
    Without it i would be lost,
    And you would no longer be in sight.

    Copyright 2005 - http://just-4-teens.com
     
    just-4-teens, Jan 20, 2006 IP
  6. mightyb

    mightyb Banned

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    #6
    You are all out of lines like drunk sprinters
    You spit junk like faulty printers

    lol sorry, i used to rap battle.
     
    mightyb, Jan 20, 2006 IP
  7. lorien1973

    lorien1973 Notable Member

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    #7
    Here is my poem. A haiku to poems

    Anyone can rhyme
    But counting five seven five
    is a lot harder

    :) :)
     
    lorien1973, Jan 20, 2006 IP
  8. MELLA

    MELLA Peon

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    #8
    Wow, Nuhassan..I loved that poem. I don't believe for a bloody second you made it up, but I love it. :)
     
    MELLA, Jan 20, 2006 IP
  9. cormac

    cormac Peon

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    #9
    Here is one from my Irish Girl

    Springtime in Ireland


    I run through lush green fields and spy,
    a flock of birds flying in the sky,
    and then they start to sweetly sing,
    to show at last it is spring.

    And fleecy lambs in fields are born,
    and the wondrous colours of the morn,
    shine purple, yellow and flame red too.
    to show the day has started a new.

    The trees they stand so graceful tall,
    protects the birds from predators call.

    Mary T.
     
    cormac, Jan 20, 2006 IP
  10. Andromeda

    Andromeda Peon

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    #10
    aww. really nice. I love these stuff!
     
    Andromeda, Jan 21, 2006 IP
  11. SumitBahl

    SumitBahl Reign of Chaos

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    #11
    BEAUTIFUL!! Very nice lines there !!!
     
    SumitBahl, Jan 21, 2006 IP
  12. nuhassan

    nuhassan Peon

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    #12
    My Love Lasts For A Lifetime


    I feel so safe
    whenever
    I am with you.
    I feel as though
    my problems
    cease to exist
    whenever I am in your arms...



    When you smile at me
    I see the sparkle
    that reaches
    into the depths
    of your eyes.



    I love everything
    about you.
    I love your smile,
    your eyes,
    and the gentle way
    that you touch me.
    I love the way
    you say my name
    and your loving words
    when you speak to me


    I have been hurt before,
    but you make it easy to handle
    what I have been through
    by being loving and kind,
    and not taking for granted
    the love that I give...
    no matter how easy
    it could be....



    You shine a bright light into my life
    where there used to be
    only darkness....
    you make me feel wanted,
    and needed,
    things I am not used to.



    You are the reason
    that I wake up
    in the morning,
    my whole world
    revolves around you....
    You are the center
    of my universe,
    and the reason
    of my existence
    and I will always love you
    for a lifetime
    and eternity,
    no matter what
    we go through.....
     
    nuhassan, Jan 21, 2006 IP
  13. iBold

    iBold Peon

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    #13
    I'm a fan of the poetry myself..all though I'm not so sure I'm bold enough to post any of mine here
     
    iBold, Jan 21, 2006 IP
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    cormac Peon

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    #14
    Go for it ;)
     
    cormac, Jan 21, 2006 IP
  15. nuhassan

    nuhassan Peon

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    My Heart is Missing You!!!

    When you are gone
    I feel so alone
    I miss you dear
    when you are not here

    You make my day
    Like when the sun shines in May
    I need to see your smile
    and I wish I could see it more then just once in a while

    You are such delight
    and add joy to my nights
    I want you to know what you mean to me
    and oh.. I hope that you can see

    My heart is missing you
    and I wonder... do you miss me to?
    I hope that you do
    because I know I miss you!!

    I always hope you are ok, and nothing is wrong
    When will I see you again.. oh I hope it won't be long!
    I need to know that you care
    and that no matter what you will always be there

    Remember this is for you, my friend
    and to you I will send
    So keep it close to you heart
    and if you do, we will never part.

    My heart is missing you!!
     
    nuhassan, Jan 24, 2006 IP
  16. digimania

    digimania Peon

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    #16
    Haha, nice one man!

    Can you please mak one for me?! :D
     
    digimania, Jan 25, 2006 IP
  17. Blogmaster

    Blogmaster Blood Type Dating Affiliate Manager

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    #17
    Do you have a site or a blog where you publish your poetry?
     
    Blogmaster, Jan 25, 2006 IP
  18. nuhassan

    nuhassan Peon

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    #18
    If someone is not a fan of poetry then he better stay off from this thread and dont post idiotic comments.:mad:

    Guys come up with some good poems. Feel pleasure in sharing your feelings.
     
    nuhassan, Jan 25, 2006 IP
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    Blogmaster Blood Type Dating Affiliate Manager

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    I don't have poems, I come up with song ideas, but not poems.
     
    Blogmaster, Jan 25, 2006 IP
  20. donwebcorleone

    donwebcorleone Peon

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    #20
    Okay, i join with a famous haiku:

    An old pond
    A frog jumps in
    The sound of water.

    Haiku is traditional japanese poetry. Its made of a 17-syllable verse divided in units of 5, 7, and 5 syllables. Sorry the translation doesnt help much.
     
    donwebcorleone, Jan 25, 2006 IP