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Discussion in 'Placement / Reviews / Examples' started by moonlighty, Jun 27, 2008.

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    moonlighty, Jun 27, 2008 IP
  2. ohtony

    ohtony Active Member

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    #2
    add a banner above your first post or between your posts
     
    ohtony, Jun 27, 2008 IP
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    put a horizontal banner at the top.. under your title... before your content
     
    kg_lew, Jun 27, 2008 IP
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    xmartel Active Member

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    You could ad another adsense ad somewhere.

    You really should break up your writing, the way you have it makes it appear to be very long and lots of people won't bother reading it.

    For instance, you have it like this:

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    Instead you should have it like this:

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    xmartel, Jun 27, 2008 IP
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    This is not so much for ads placement, but you should do some line breaks in your articles for better readability.
     
    jonespr, Jun 27, 2008 IP
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    thank you.I will improve on my blog content
     
    moonlighty, Jun 28, 2008 IP
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    I have adjusted my blog already , please review again
    thank you for comment
     
    moonlighty, Jul 1, 2008 IP
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    For starters you should give credit to the author of articles you've stolen from ezinearticles. You know if you take content for free you should have at least some dignity to credit the real authors with their resource boxes aka. backlinks. You are not authorized to publish articles without the resource box!

    Anyhow, you won't rank anywhere in the search engines if that is what you expect.
     
    JohnS0N, Jul 1, 2008 IP
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    Nice adjustments. I suggest, if most of your articles are very long, then put only 2 posts per page. People dislike scrolling a lot. Your blog has a narrow width, and that causes excessive scrolling.

    Also, your ads have blended well. Try new colour schemes, and try to match the colour of ad links to the colour of your site links. Maybe that would help.
     
    gauharjk, Jul 2, 2008 IP