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Discussion in 'General Business' started by Hems1, Apr 18, 2010.

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    Hello Friends, please review my new health site http://www.alternativtreatment.com
    your suggestions are welcome.
     
    Hems1, Apr 18, 2010 IP
  2. kidsko

    kidsko Well-Known Member

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    Personally I don't find this page enjoyable whatsoever. Overly simplified and no direction whatsoever. I suppose the direction is on the right hand side with all the links. But they don't really lead to anywhere and I imagine your looking to get adsense clicks. I hope it works out for you because the page is so basic.
     
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    I think it is a cool idea. And the website has a simple design.Did you optimize it ? You have added kontera?
    Best of luck
     
    kcnck, Apr 18, 2010 IP
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    Hello Hems1, your site is pretty hopeless. Maybe if you hired an editor to improve the bad English and grammar, so that you're site made some sense, you could then start to figure out what was wrong with it. People do not enjoy reading a website where the basic sentences don't even make sense. Also, nobody bothers to read a "Wall of Text". Headlines, sub-headlines, bullets, graphics . . . it's all missing.
     
    CarlDia, Apr 18, 2010 IP
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    There is to much white on your main page but i guess its not bad, Good luck.
     
    Diewithenvy, Apr 19, 2010 IP
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    Try to put some css style for menu which will attract the users.
     
    s.ham, Apr 21, 2010 IP
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    garyJinvest18 Greenhorn

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    Your site is not really attractive. There are still lots of empty spaces. It doesn't attract us to be patient to read the content. You can put some more photos or make it more focus with darker color. Try more!
     
    garyJinvest18, Apr 21, 2010 IP
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    Its really impressive keep it up & best of luck :)
     
    wildogre, Apr 21, 2010 IP
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    Change up the font some, insert some css
     
    mern, Apr 21, 2010 IP
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    Your site need a professionnal and beautiful design, a person who know how to maintain and organize a site to add more plugins and others things.
    As a reader, i find your site too simple, not enought professionnal.
     
    sushie, Apr 21, 2010 IP
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    use nice image will be value added to your site ...
     
    prasxz, Apr 21, 2010 IP
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    clean site.
    concider adding a navigation above so users can view your 'about us' and etc..
     
    etc, Apr 21, 2010 IP
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    Its not horrible, Ive seen much worse. I think it can go places with a little bit of work. Ad some adsense and kontera to monitize the site to atleast start generating some revenue. Good luck and just keep working on it till its at its best!
     
    kevbo22, Apr 21, 2010 IP
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    I like your site content but i think you should improve the design. I would add more pics, divide info into categories, add an option to make a search and change the blue color in the header (Alternative Treatment).
     
    WorksForWeb, Apr 22, 2010 IP
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    White is a good choice. Makes your website look more serious and user friendly. However, I would improve the design a bit. Like mentioned previously, it looks too 'simple'.

    Don't get me wrong, simple is good but your website is missing that 'something' that every website should have.
     
    Conama, Apr 22, 2010 IP